句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。
Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning. Then go to the park by bike,have been fun in the park. At noon and parents to eat for lunch at McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam with schoolmate in the school playing basketball,from four PM till six PM.At after dinner,Sam with father for a walk,father bought him a classical CD. This day Sam had how interesting.