句式变化多样;文中的过程性词汇不足;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误。
Sam got up at 6 am yestoday.then he ride bicycle to park and have fun,he had lunch with his parens at McDonld's ,on the afternoon,Sam played bastkable with classmates till 4pm to 6pm.after dinner ,Sam and his father went for a walk together ,his father bought a classical CD for him,Sam had a funning day