初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

My dream is to be an independent man, I have enough money from my work. So can take good care of my parents. I don't want that they care about me like caring about a child, although I like it. Also I can do anything what I want and nobody will be afraid, because I hate the feeling, I hope my families and friends are in happiness all the time. I like to go to the ghost desert and find out what had happened with it. I like to go to the deep forest and search for its secrets, as like what are the animals talking about. I like to find the truth when I am an independent man.