初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

The first love of millionaire is my favorite movie. The story happened in a village where had much beautiful scenery, there were the traditional wooden house, the tall trees, the beautiful flowers, the limpid river ,the fresh air... I like the actress because she has a pair of special eyes, they are bright and soulful. Also, she is cute and nice girl. I hope I can find a girlfriend like the girl in the movie.