简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
A MEANINGFUL DAY Sam get up at 6'clock yestaday then rided his bike went to the park. He had fun in there. After games his parents takes him went to the McDonald's to have their lunch. At afternoon,Sam and his classmates played basketsball at the playground that is from 4pm untill to 6pm. After dinner,Sam and his parents went for a walk who bought him a classic music CD. What a meaningful day Sam had.My friend Mary was bought a new apple mobile phone which I admired.