错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at 6am yesterday.Then,he went to the park by bicycle,and played very happy.He had lunch at Mcdonalds with his parent.In the afternoon,Sam had played bascketball with his classmates from 4pm till 6pm. After dinner,Sam had gone for a walk together with his father,his father gave him a classic music CD. How wonderful Sam has had.