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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；从句数量偏少。
Tom will start his school life from this fall. He is not only excited about it ,but also a little upset. Because that his parents make some rules for him. That is I- get up at 6:00,for he must go to school at 6:15. And the rule of not eat outside let him a little sad because tom is so expected for having a rest at Mcdonalds with his friends after school. Further, not listen to music on school days, and don't watch TV on school nights, these two rules make tom almost crazy , he loves these so much, but now he cannot enjoy. Finally, the rule of being back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening, let him feel that school life is much more harder than parents work.
