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Sam got up at 6:00 am. yestoday. Then he went to the park by bike. he had fun at the park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played baskeball with his classmates from 4pm.to 6pm. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought him a class music CD. What a wanderful day Sam had.