正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at 6:00 am. yesterday. Then he went to the park by bike. He had a great fun at the park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played baskeball with his classmates from 4 to 6. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought him a class music CD. What a wonderful day Sam had.