若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at 6:00 am. yesterday. Then he went to the park where he had great fun there by bike. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. And in the afternoon, Sam played basketball with his classmates from 4 to 6. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought him a class music CD. What a wonderful day Sam had.