若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Sam got up at 6:00 am. yesterday. Then he went to the park where he had great fun there by bike. At noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. Sam played basketball with his classmates from 4 to 6 in the afternoon. Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner. After that his father bought him a class music CD. What a wonderful day Sam had.