七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

A Happy Day my name is Sam.I had a wondful day ysterday. In that day,i get up at 6:00 in the morning.Aftering cleanning my face,i rode my bike to a park.I was so excited to play with some kids in the park. In the afternoon,i had lunch in a McDonald's with myparents.My friend played basketball with me at about 4:00. After dinner,my father and me go for a walk,and my father bought a musical CD for me. I was very happy yesterday.