七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6am yesterday,he went to park by bike,he had a lot fun in park.He eat supper with his parents in McDonald's.In the afternoon he played basketball with his frieds in shool from 4pm till 6pm. sam and his dad went for a walk after dinner,his dad bough a classic CD for him ,what a intresting day!