文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅。
Sam got up at 6am tomorrow,Then he rode bike to Park.he was very happy.he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's.He played basketball with his classmates on afternoon,playing from 4pm till 6pm.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father.His father bought a CD to him.It's a funny day today.